How to Edit an Email to a Professor Without Sounding Stiff

Many students try to sound respectful by making every sentence longer. The result can feel polite in intention but difficult in practice. A professor opens the message and has to pass through apologies, background, and careful hedging before reaching the actual point. That slows everything down. In academic email, respect is shown not only through tone, but through making the request easy to understand and easy to answer.

A safer structure is simple: identify yourself, state the purpose, then add the context that matters. Are you asking about office hours, a deadline, feedback, or a course requirement? Put that request near the top. The earlier the real purpose appears, the easier it is for the reader to respond without guessing what the email wants from them.

If the English feels translated, focus on three pressure points: the opening sentence, the line that asks for something, and the closing thanks. Phrases like “I am writing this email to kindly ask whether...” are not incorrect, but they often create unnecessary weight. A shorter sentence with the same meaning usually sounds more natural. Easydue is useful here because the draft often already has the right information; it just needs lighter, more readable phrasing.