How to Polish a LinkedIn About Section in Natural English

A LinkedIn About section can collapse into template language very quickly: I am a passionate and motivated student with strong communication skills. The sentence is not evil. It is just thin. It could belong to almost anyone, which means it tells the reader almost nothing. A stronger profile gives shape: what you study, what you have tried, what kind of problems you notice, and what opportunities you are moving toward.

Start from your current direction rather than a grand personality claim. For example: I am a data science student interested in turning messy classroom and internship data into readable product insights. It is not glossy, but it has a path. It gives the reader a field, a habit of mind, and a reason to keep reading. Specificity does more work than enthusiasm.

Many international students write their About section like a compressed application essay. LinkedIn can be lighter than that without becoming casual. One workable shape is: current focus, one or two concrete experiences, skills you are building, and the kinds of conversations or roles you welcome. Avoid stacking words that cannot be checked, such as excellent, hardworking, and passionate, unless the surrounding details prove them.